-1: To kick things off, you've got remaining formatting errors where your name is, this comes from the last app you made which you deleted (not the old one you stuck with, the one which is a copy paste of this but with many, many more formatting errors). The profile ID is correct, though it would be preferable to have the "https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/" before it. The paragraph for "Why do you want to become a moderator?" has a lot of "I want"'s; not very creative. Grammar is reasonable, and minor spelling errors scattered about. The rest of the application is fairly solid, however the -1 comes from what happened with the last application (making an application, then proceeding to ignore the server entirely and go elsewhere to apply for staff), and the fact that you had your VIP temporarily taken due to repeated rule breaking. I don't feel that you're very reliable, nor that you're ready for this position.
(Minor gripe which doesn't influence the rating, you put two spaces after most periods. A very fine detail, hence why it won't affect your rating. Perhaps watch out on doing that.)
(Minor gripe which doesn't influence the rating, you put two spaces after most periods. A very fine detail, hence why it won't affect your rating. Perhaps watch out on doing that.)
Told yall so